Empty
Category: Writers Block
Post 1 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Monday, 12-Sep-2005 12:35:58
Empty, alone and writhing in the death throes of happiness, I rip out my heart and lay it gently at your feet.For no other reason, than to hope, that you will at last acknowledge my pain,it's source and it's ending, which will never come; so I resign myself to twist and coil like a snake consumed by it's own venom.
Post 2 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Monday, 12-Sep-2005 13:24:44
oh i like that. it's very well written
Post 3 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Monday, 12-Sep-2005 13:28:23
Hmm thank you I wasn't that impressed with it..smile..
Post 4 by bashful (professional hypocrite) on Monday, 12-Sep-2005 18:36:02
ouch! Precisely how I feel.
Post 5 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 13-Sep-2005 3:01:37
Wow that's dark. Really like it though.
Post 6 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Tuesday, 13-Sep-2005 9:21:35
Cheers peeps hmm.. Bashful you know where I am if you want to talk ok..
Post 7 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 13-Sep-2005 9:29:13
No problem. I have to say that I like your poetry, I wish I was able to write such dark poetry, I can't do it in German either.
Post 8 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Tuesday, 13-Sep-2005 10:38:52
Thank you..:} I have no idea how I manage to do it either..so we both have a mystery to solve..
Post 9 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Tuesday, 13-Sep-2005 10:39:39
good morning Goblin and I like this very much strong like always
Post 10 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Tuesday, 13-Sep-2005 11:15:09
Good morning Maria..thank you I honestly didnt expect this reaction ...I like your work also very thought provoking..
Post 11 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 13-Sep-2005 11:47:28
It's just the way I felt until last year, that is also a reason why I like it.
Post 12 by bashful (professional hypocrite) on Tuesday, 13-Sep-2005 18:03:54
hmmm. If my venom would consume me, I'd have a lot less to worry about. Ah well! I still really like it.
Post 13 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Wednesday, 14-Sep-2005 9:30:19
Would you want to be consumed...thank you